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[大家创作谈] 鲁迅先生的写作秘诀:多看多练习

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今天要介绍的是中国现代文学奠基人:鲁迅。毛主席曾评价:“鲁迅的方向,就是中华民族新文化的方向。”他原名:周樟寿,后改名“周树人”,字“豫山”,后改“豫才”。“鲁迅”是他1918年发表《狂人日记》时所用的笔名,也是他影响最为广泛的笔名,浙江绍兴人。他是著名文学家、思想家,五四新文化运动的重要参与者。代表作品有《呐喊》、《彷徨》、《朝花夕拾》、《狂人日记》、《阿Q正传》等。

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有人问鲁迅先生,文章怎么写?先生答:“不知道”。这不是自谦,而是难以一言说清。
不知道大家看过鲁迅先生写的《作文秘诀》吗?不少武侠小说中有《武功秘籍》,厨师有《祖传秘籍》,作家有吗,没说过祖传作家吧?


这本鲁迅先生写的《作文秘诀》很有意思,他谈到很多行业,都有秘诀,甚至传男不传女。但作文却是没有的,否则可以登广告,收学费了。开一个三天包成文豪学校了。以中国之大,或者也许会有罢,但是,这其实是骗子
就像现在的一些培训班一样,你在他们的指导下,能写出好文章,但也只是在他们的指导下。你脱离了他们,就茫然、无助了。
‘应该这么写‘,必须从大作家们的完成了的作品去领会。那么,’不应该那么写‘这一面,恐怕最好是从那同一作品的未定稿本去学习了。在这里,简直好像艺术家在对我们用实物教授。恰如他指着每一行,直接对我们这样说――你看――哪,这里应该删去的。这要缩短,这要改作,因为不自然了。在这里,还得加些渲染,使形象更加显豁些。”

浙江柯桥鲁镇--狂人日记


鲁迅先生劝我们多读好作品,学习他们为什么这样修改,好在哪里?认真的比较、研究,能得到不少启示。但也不要专看文学类书籍,天文、地理、数学、风俗、游记等等都要看看,否则弄得连常识也没有了,写出来的文章狗屁不通,让人发笑。


没有常识的作家,怎能写出丰富多彩的作品呢?作家不但要有常识,而且还要知识丰富,采得百花酿佳蜜。鲁迅先生劝人“必须如蜜蜂一样,采过许多花,这才能酿出蜜来,倘若叮在一处,所得就非常有限,枯燥了”。
鲁迅先生曾说:“文章应该怎样做,我说不出来,因为自己的作文,是由于多看和练习,此外并无心得或方法的。”
丰富的知识积累、多多练习才是作文秘诀。



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